Sunday, November 23, 2008

[If mama/ could see]

I chose this poem because I thought it was challenging and had a deep message. I first chose A Red, Red Rose but decided that it was to simple. This poem is challenging to not make it seem like a murder seen. It is very hard to get across that Lucy doesn't exist but I think I MIGHT be up to the chalenge.

Tell Me how you thought I did!

Cody
Luthy

2 comments:

Mrs. Gilman said...

I think you did really well! This was a difficult poem to recite, but you made it interesting and I think the class enjoyed it. How do you think you did?

CodyL4 said...

thank u mrs gilamn! i liked it but i thought i could have done ALOT BETTER! if i hadn't have started cracking up when WHITTNEYS PHONE went off! oh well wat can u do???